All Comments on 'Brother and Sister's First Holiday'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
There is more right?

I like how this is going, not many mature sibling stories around here that I can relate to so I hope there is more where this came from.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
How nice

Now that Nick and Alison have been intimate and reconnected, how about descriptions? Is she gently stroking the hair across his chest and down his abs? on his sexy thighs and arms? Let them explore!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
A good start...

Keep going, this is just a teaser. I can definitely identify with "mature" siblings having an awakening of sexual interest - its not that uncommon. Keep going, at least let the two consummate their relationship!

blackknight314blackknight314about 6 years ago
A good start.

However we need more to the story. Or was it your intention to just have 2 fifty somethings masterbate one time?

Turtle1952Turtle1952about 6 years ago
More Please

The beginnings of what could be a hot sexy sibling love story. I would give you a 5 when he cums in her pussy.

rightbankrightbankabout 6 years ago
I'm hoping

This is the opening introduction to a longer narrative.

Please

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Encore!

Nicely written. Wished a little more background between paragraph one and two but overall a good start.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
mmm

so hot, heel geil

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Families that suck together, stay together.

Boy, i wish my sister had a sex drive like that, Great story, I firmly believe, that situation happens in many families. I was not so lucky.

ole69boyole69boyabout 6 years ago
GREAT STORY..

I so enjoy B&S fuck/love stories of mature siblings. This stories are had to find.

This was well written and showed love care and passion, just like it was supposed to.

Thank you and I hope to read more.

RanDog025RanDog025about 6 years ago
A GOOD STORY

YOU DID A VERY GOOD JOB WRITING THIS, THANKS!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Nice !

A great start. Wish I had a sister...

ole69boyole69boyalmost 6 years ago
AWESOME STORY.. Thank you

That was just so hot. I so love-enjoy a good ( which this sure was) brother /sister fuck/love story. It love. lust and mutual satisfaction.

Well written. Kinda reminds me of my first B/S adventure. One I will never forget.

WatchedBethWatchedBethover 4 years ago
Intense

Wonderful description. Enjoyed this short story

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Great start..

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Way too short, but s potential for future stories? Her pussy so seriously needs to be a thick monster bush. incest encounters have no time for a trim or a shave -- ever. Make that pussy monster untrimmed hairy and he needs to be very thick.

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