All Comments on 'The Blackheart Stone'

by EddieFuggles

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Great Job

I would love to see a second chapter to this

mBrowmBrowabout 6 years ago
Excellent Story

Great narrative, plus remarkably good writing, easy to read. Thanks!

gordo12gordo12about 6 years ago
Not my usual reading

But I thought this was well done. 4*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Very good.

Hot... so hot.

But the end was kinda predictable.

Great story though.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
SMOKING HOT, but be careful what you wish for...

Delicious hot reading, well said, described, and enthralling.

Some have almost wished for this type of change, and this describes the double edge consequences well. The lead-in enticement, the trapping, and the resulting consequences...WELL DONE, I LOVE IT!

justine_1692justine_1692almost 6 years ago
Enjoyed it.

I would have liked to have had more details about the events between the possessions and seen some more character development but for a quick read it was enjoyable.

UniracerUniraceralmost 6 years ago

The sentence 'Here come the tits and ass, baby!' made me laugh and I want to add it to my lexicon. Well done.

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