All Comments on 'She Made Me a New Man'

You or your mistress. What a putz. What a waste of space

Loved it! Ignore the haters, why do they read femdom stories?!!

You definitely have my interest in ready the other two stories. I love femdom stories. I have noticed that haters always write their comments anonymous because they don't want anyone to know they read these stories.

Really good start, anxious to see how this progresses!

have looked all my life for a woman like that

wow

It's a good start to a series. Looking forward to reading how things continue to play out.

Nice exposition and set up. Great first act. Looking forward to more.

Interesting start but assuming the next two instalments are each going to be as short as the first one I think you might be going to run out of time (and paper) to tell the story properly. But please carry on and take on board any constructive criticism. Ignore the anonymous comments from the ignorant people who pop up and are only on here to annoy and give you one (if you’ll pardon the expression).

A wonderful story. I can see there is depth to it from the hint at the beginning of the breadth of changes She has achieved upon him.

I like your writing. Easy to read, believable dialogue, interesting situations well described. I hope you will continue to write, somewhere, something. Of course, I would be disingenuous if I didn't say I'd like to see this story continue. If not that, or if not on Lit, please grow your writing.