All Comments on 'The Text Message Ch. 01'

Very well thought out, written, and presented. l look forward to additional chapters.

As SirCal said well thought out chapiter

Development is great slow and interesting. Looking forward to future chapiters

I am also looking forward to reading how this relationship develops. Please continue this story with at least a few more chapters.

Great !! More please.

Great Story! Looking forward to the next part!

Very thoughtful, characters have dimension and depth. Looking forward to more.

This is my 5th time reading it.

Great story. How imaginative without being crass

5/5

I write really hardcore stuff, and that's what I generally read on Literotica. But this story kept my rapt attention for 5 pages with almost no sex! These are two very endearing characters exploring a really interesting relationship. I will definitely read the remaining chapters to see where this goes! Five stars!