All Comments on 'Misgivings'

Oh My God! That was amazing!! I love long stories like that - and damn can you write. WOW! Don't stop!! I'd love to hear where things go for Bri & Marty!!

On literotica, I certainly expect erotica, but this was literature. I literally cried when reading this; keep 'em coming! And it sounds like the very first thing you notice about someone is their eyes. Hm?

Quite simply, this is a masterpiece from beginning to end without a misstep along the way. Congratulations.

Great story, am looking forward to reading your next submitions.

a breathtaking epic covering the whole gamut of emotions. I love your stories, they draw me in, take hold of me and hold the breath inside of me until the last word, when I exhale in pure delight. Another gem, Alex. Loved it. Well done. Matriach

I normally don't follow the lesbian stories, but this one intrigued me at the time.

Your writing style is superb! Excellent use of paragraphs, and probably the best use of grammar in a story I've seen in the last few months!

This story is excellently written, a smooth plot, and presentable characters.

I'll be keeping a closer eye on you.

-Isfacat

Wow this story was great, I am just coming to terms with the fact that I am a lesbian, and this was a great story and gave me all that I needed to set my mind straight. Keep the stories coming.

Good mix of life and erotica. Please, keep up the good work.

I loved it. thank you for writing this story.

Don't usually read love stories, but I couldn't stop reading. Probably the best well written story I've read on Literotica, A+ for English!!

This is one powerful story. The emotions are so intense and pure. I am envious of lesbian couples who are free to express love for each other in their society. I am currenlty in a lesbian relationship myself. But you cannot believe the number of complications we continue to try to overcome which makes our relationship extremely difficult and unfair for us who love each other dearly. I just hope and wish that my story could have the same wonderful ending in the future.

indiegurl_01@yahoo.com

that is a <b>stunningly</b> good story- exquisitely written w/ fantastic characters & all kinds of amazingly emotional plot bits... & of course, really really REALLY hot sex ;)~ i couldn't be any more pleased!!! i adore marty's character- its so hard to go wrong w/ a sexy silent butch who rides motorcycles & is a secret genius *drool* i envy bri to no end!

i hope to see more stories from their lives on the update pages...

I have read all your stories, {twice, "2 times"} to be truthful. I do so enjoy your style of writing, can't wait until your next sumission, thank you so much for sharing.

Nikki

Had me on the edge of my seat, truly a great work. I've read everything you've written so far and must say I can't wait for the next story. Thank you for sharing such a wonderful gift with all of us.

Well, this is not my first time reading this story. It's either 3rd or 4th time and i read all your stories over and over again and never get sick of them. You're still my fav writer around here. No one pulled it off as well as you do. Do keep writing. Thank you. =)

There are no words to convey the absolute brilliance of this story, I'm half dazed right now after just finishing it... wow... Incredible story as always, please continue writing!

you're writing is so beautiful, i can't get over it.

Very good story. If you could have left out the fake dicks, it would have been great.

I loved it absolutely loved it, i am enjoying your work so much.

thank you for sharing your gift

I really love your stories! Your butch characters are so sexy! I like all of the drama with the sex. The love between the characters is so heartfelt. Please keep writing!

Great job, Alex. I think I can speak for other fans of yours in saying you have a great gift. I see in your bio that you are trying to get published. I hope your dreams come true. If so, please let us know when you get something published and the title.

Addicted to your stories. Wow

A grand tale that was a pleasure to read. I espacially love the way you describe the characters by their eye color. Thanks alot for the thrills.

Loved every word. Tender love & hot sex - yummy!

Cat x

i came here to read some ichybichy sexy lesbian story and beat my meat.

but this shit is really give me hit.

thanks for writing a beautiful story.

A wonderful story told through believable characters with amazing emotion. I must admit the scene in which Bri and her father reconciled brought a tear to my eye. I'm going to be on the lookout for more of your stories,

Hot damn,keep them "coming" brilliant stuff,great story line,romantic,erotic,even the toy bits were excellent,write more please

never get tired of re-reading this story,instead it made me inlove with love..kudos to the author for a very brilliant story.(cinder)

I loved how shy they started and how hot they became... My heart ached for what both girls dealt with in their pasts... So happy they found each other. Can I ask? Are Marty and Bri based on a real couple?

Was a great story line and love the build up will you do a second chapter.

You story is a great one with superb character development and believable incidents throughout. The only criticism I have is instead of using the phrases "lied back" or "lied down" use "lie back" or "lie down" as the form of "lie" you are using is not for putting oneself in a horizontal position. It can get quite confusing, but "lied" is for false statements. Check out the dictionary and you will find the correct forms of the verb to use.

Sorry to start on a negative note, Alex, but you can be a little careless with your nouns and pronouns. Sometimes it's a bit difficult to recognise which character you are writing about. Apart from that this is an enjoyable story.

What kind of sadist makes their characters eat anything but chickenstrips at Denny's?

This was a great story. Sad at times but loved the two main characters. Their love was strong and beautiful.

Hi, I love all your stories but just out of curiosity why do they put condoms on the dildos?

What a powerful tale of love . Beautifully written with great detail . Perfection . What a fitting end to violent Peter .

I think this is one of your best!!!

Thanks for the great read!

DEFINITELY another winner!!

Congrats on such a well thought out tale. It had everything and was so well laid out that it was entertaining and erotic.

:) :) :) :) :)

5 stars and 5 smileys lol

Fabulous ....... Never judge a book by the cover , marty is an excellent charcter ....... Well written and a freat love input

If her dad's arm is really fractured, there's no way he can wield a baseball bat well enough to threaten an athletic young guy. Otherwise, good story.

What is up with all these women having a guys name in your fantasy that alone ruins the story for anyone who has a clue what an actual good story is and how 1 is written

A good story again!

Love this story.

Still an excellent read.