All Comments on 'A Romantic Story'

by YKN4949

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
romance

I love romance wonderful story please right more like this one

This is the kind of story i love to read rather than the abuse stories we see a lot of here. Why cant we all have love Thank you so much

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Nice slaapy romantic comedy? I thought it was very well written and characters were very good and very believable. The eroitca was pretty solid to. Personally, I like my stories a little harder and nastier, so I will say this is not horribly high on the monkeyspank-o-meter for me. But that is just personal taste. The sex fit in very well with the level and tone of the story.

Bravo!

ipreferoralipreferoralabout 6 years ago
Emma's musings

made me think about love. Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Great

That is a real love story that everyone should get a chance at

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Fantastic story

Such a great story. Glad to see that you are back.

pg240pg240about 6 years ago
Exquisite

A love story with powerful emotional impact. Beautifully written.

Lonely_readerLonely_readerabout 6 years ago
As usual

Very, very, very good!

See you next time.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
5 stars

Great story. Loved everthing about it. Look foward to your next story

silverace1silverace1about 6 years ago
The best!!

This story ignited my own fantasies of many years. I am 75 years young and, although married three times, there has always been that thought and wonder what it would feel to be a bottom! Thanks for your fanning the flame!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

very enjoyable read, thank you for sharing your work :)

DeannaTDeannaTabout 6 years ago
So real!

I loved your story! It was so real because you built the characters so well! Of course the physical love scene was so hot, but what I really liked was when Emma confronted Andy and suddenly realized what she and Hannah had. Great writing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Great story. I liked the build up, but I loved the sex scene

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
If people weren't so narrow-minded ...

... this story would be in the Romance section where it so truly belongs. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Keep being awesome!

As a trans woman I find myself drifting over to this category of story now and again but almost all of it is either unreadable or boring. The one major exception to that is the stuff that you write. I'll be honest in saying that I don't always like all of your stories but I think you are one hell of a writer and I'm always willing to give your work a chance. For the last two years or so I've kept an eye out for it. And some of your stuff, like this story for instance, ends up being work that I absolutely love. So, personal history for me is that I fell for my best friend who is also trans and who invited me to live with her when I was having a rough time in my life and was worried about homelessness, so I related to this story on a whole lot of levels. (We're now in a long term triad living with another trans girl. I do have to say, it's rather fun living a life that could easily pass for someone else's smutty fiction.) Thank you for writing something sweet, romantic, and unapologeticly filthy like this that I could actually see myself in. Thank you for writing about trans women who are real rounded characters with lives and personalities. <3

CliterateDykeCliterateDykealmost 6 years ago

Absolutely stunning. The realization between them & the absolute Beaty of the lovemaking was so intensely passionate. Just gorgeous! Thank you so much.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Made me speechless

I have read a beat about trans and cd stories, but felt all was just porn or sexual stories, never ever i have felt a love, its like i know now how em felt, i am not good in writing in proper words how i m feeling after reading maybe something ELECTRIC, may be the way em filled first time when she kissed hanah

Thanks a lot for making me feel this

ChironomidChironomidabout 5 years ago
Great story

You always find a way to address TS stories in original and interesting ways. I'm hooked on your work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
10/10

omg this was great I loved it.

my only nitpick was the ejaculating took me out of it, we still make pre-cum, but no girl on hormones actually makes and cum or anything when we orgasm

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Wow!

I haven't read a story by you YKN, love all your work!

TSreaderTSreaderover 3 years ago
A lovely story!

Lovely and very yummy too... Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Masterpiece

This story is beautiful and its art. Its very special, well written, and i love the whole thing.

Rapier875Rapier875over 2 years ago

Very gentle and very nicely told.

Well worth 5 Stars.

Rapier

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I appreciated having a character turn down an encounter that would not have felt right to her, as opposed to many stories which strive to include more sex scenes regardless of taboos or fitting character motivations. It was refreshing to have a more realistic representation of trans women, including physical differences between transitions. I imagine a story of this same style with a trans person before and after hormones/genital surgery facing their own insecurities and partner's response could be very powerful. Thank you for writing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

It was a beautiful story. The middle aged man looking for a fling while his wife was out was a reminder that the world's not all unicorns and rainbows. But when you fall in love with your best friend and marry her, irrespective of the order in which it happens, what could be better? I stand by your musings on passion and "happily ever afters". Popular media (fairy tales, romance tales, movies, dramas, etc.) do often present an unsustainable model of relationships. It's often just the "suspension bridge effect" at play. And so many of the older romance movies (at least in my country) focus just on "getting" the girl, often by deceiving her. That's well and good for a movie, where you don't see what happens after the "hero" "gets" the girl, but it's not good relationship advice. And unfortunately, many young people are erroneously educated in the ways of romance through these movies, to their detriment.

Again, I really enjoyed the story. I apologise for most of my comment being a tangent :)

Vell84Vell8410 months ago

This was so... I loved it! I hope to find something similar to Em and Hannah myself some day 🥰

Beejay3Beejay38 months ago

Geez.. what an uplifting story of sexual pleasure and satisfaction They at once, fell totally for each other…just a magic feeling ending in orgasmic surrender to each other.

Thanks for this , it was pleasurable reading.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

A very well written and quite erotic exploration of the difference between love and passion and how they can interact and affect each other. I enjoyed this very much, and was rooting for the positive outcome. Thank you!

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