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by WickedEve01/04/05

Very smart rhyme

You do great job with rhyme. Very enjoyable read.

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by My Erotic Tale01/05/05

radical

wow, great poem,
solid hard hitting with a smile
word play was great,
a roller coaster ride in words.
fun read, thanks
rev rev!

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