Hi there, I loved to read your story. It wasn't very erotic an I would probably rate it a 7 on a scale of 1 - 10. Do write a few more stories. Cheers, Sam
Wasn't that bad. needs more erotic feeling, though. ill give it a 7.5
I loved it. ;0)~ Keep up the good work Magic!
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Not a bad story at all
Hi there,
I loved to read your story. It wasn't very erotic an I would probably rate it a 7 on a scale of 1 - 10.
Do write a few more stories.
Cheers,
Sam
Pretty Good
Wasn't that bad. needs more erotic feeling, though. ill give it a 7.5
Fantastic finale!
I loved it. ;0)~
Keep up the good work Magic!
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