by LitEroCat
Well told story, over all a 5 a few tense and verb usage errors but the worst was enervating *causing one to feel drained of energy or vitality? I think you meant invigorating
Funny that I got invigorating right in the seminal image.
I changed the mixed verbs to present tense. Though technically correct, some of them now feel like stage directions instead of internal thoughts. What do y'all think?
Well he DID get a piece of her. lol I liked the story even the idea of the prank. It did sound a bit disgusting but with the right seasoning,hey?
Put you in the favs
Proof that you never know your neighbors as well as your coffee. Good writing, sexy and humorous story perfect for April Fools Day.