All Comments on 'April Morning Coffee'

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FieroGT1988FieroGT1988about 6 years ago
nice change

Well told story, over all a 5 a few tense and verb usage errors but the worst was enervating *causing one to feel drained of energy or vitality? I think you meant invigorating

LitEroCatLitEroCatabout 6 years agoAuthor
Fixed

Funny that I got invigorating right in the seminal image.

I changed the mixed verbs to present tense. Though technically correct, some of them now feel like stage directions instead of internal thoughts. What do y'all think?

prinnaveaprinnaveaabout 6 years ago
Blood Coffee?

Well he DID get a piece of her. lol I liked the story even the idea of the prank. It did sound a bit disgusting but with the right seasoning,hey?

Put you in the favs

ErosOJoyErosOJoyabout 5 years ago
Neighbors

Proof that you never know your neighbors as well as your coffee. Good writing, sexy and humorous story perfect for April Fools Day.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Fun story.

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