All Comments on 'They Made Marion... Pt. 02'

by JSF79

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yukonnightsyukonnightsabout 6 years ago
Nice Turn

At the end of part one, it seemed that the two younger women would now own their teacher...I like the turn you did on this second part! It showed a fulfilling relationship, which is always more erotic and satisfying to my tastes. Your story serves to illustrate the great spectrum of variety in human sexuality, and was well done in my opinion.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
lovely

i totally agree with yukonnights comment . i myself am discovering just how wide and varied my own sexuality is , let alone being trans . i would dearly love for you to continue this story . loads of thanks from me - sarah

RubberuwRubberuwalmost 6 years ago
Excellentl

Love your stories!

Looking forward to your next one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Liked the shift in story to a more honest one...

BDSM relationships are not all aggression of one party over another, so I was really glad when you switched from what looked like it was going down an aggressive, almost revenge-like theme, to one where their play may have elements of that dominant-aggressive behaviour but now in a context of a firm, loving relationship between the parties. Just wish you wrote longer stories! You get me wet then leave me hanging out to dry!

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