Every Year, Every Christmas

I gave up after a few paragraphs

I wasn't seeing a story to I rated it 1*.

No you're wrong...

...this is all too realistic. These corporate bastards like Todd are all over the place. They don't give a rat's ass about anyone but themselves. Bosses and business partners like Todd destroy good people every day, and are proud of themselves for doing it. These bastards are sociopaths that take great pleasure out of destroying good, honest, loving people. Why? Because they can. Business ethics and honour have all but dissapeared. That is why we are in the mess we are today.

Good story Bish.

DWmoroncok is so stupid

you can tell when she's used the computer by the white-out on the screen

HE SHOULDA

HE SHOULDA BUSTED A CAP IN BOTH THEIR BITCH ASSES.

Good Story!!

Thanks for sharing.

i agree

with dwornock a couple paragraphs made me sick.

I Didn't like It .... Sorry 😞

I feel this story had excellent potential but somewhere along the lines the author screwed the pooch. Let me see if I understand this correctly; she loves her husband but she can't resist being a complete gutter trash for some other man, she willing threw her husband & kids away so she can get that dick anytime, she told her husband although that she loves him she wants to keep getting dick down by the dipshit they considered a friend, what's even more astonishing is her statement/ question that her husband loves her enough to allow her to continue with her fuck fair because she's hooked on the dick like a crackhead hooked on crack. I'm sorry but WTF?! I really don't understand why the husband is sitting at the restaurant hoping the slut would return--- WHY?! Why pine away for this trash? She didn't love him because if she did she wouldn't of allowed her pussy to do the thinking for her, she abandons her kids/husband because getting the dick was first priority than destroying her family, yet this complete moronic husband wants her back?! Fuck for?! If she was able to walk out on her family without any thought why would any man in his right mind would actually want her back to pollute his life & kids life ? I think the husband should've just moved on instead of living in the past. The husband needs to stop dwelling on a love that really wasn't there on her side . I didn't care for either character, I think the wife's a fucking slut & the husband is wimping out as far as moving on he deserves better; his kids deserve better. The slut deserves AIDS.

I have mixed feelings about this story

It kept my interest for the positive side but the outlandish behavior of the wife to be so completely taken by Todd and to become his fuck toy and in the process turn her back on her kids, her marriage and her husband. It is extremely unlikely that any man could be the extremely good lover as she thought Todd was. There are only a few different ways to pleasure your partner and also even though she said she loved what
was between his legs that statement in of itself is mainly BS. Contrary to most erotic stories written there is only minor differences between men when they make love/
One thing that was passed over about Todd's fucking style was that in deference to her husband Todd was very forceful almost to the point of rape. But the story depended on the obsession by Maime for Todd which was way off a factual mark and way overblown in the story.

Three things

I find hard to believe. One, that the wife, given her background, would have been seduced by Todd. As you built her character, I just don't see her giving herself to him. Two, Given the strength of character hubby was reputed to have, why wouldn't he go after Todd immediately? He had the resources. Protect his wife. If necessary, have someone blow Todd's balls off. Whatever it takes. And three, you said he kept track of the wife and Todd. Given that, wouldn't he know she was done with Todd and in the restaurant? Sorry too many holes for me to really like this story.

Why attempt to glorify a whore.

Because, she is just that. And, why make her husband a wimp in wanting her back.
Doesn't compute.

the woman was a worthless piece of trash, the exhusband a mentally ill

self abuser who cant heal. They never should have had children. Whores are whores, never anything else. My first thought of her addition to his cock was it was coated in drugs........

Damn

The whore wife made a conscious decision to leave her loving husband. She wanted him to emotionally need and feed her while sexually being gratified by an asshole wife stealing low-life prick. Now she stays away. I think she should play in traffic. Fucking cunt.

Don't cheat.

This story gives clear definition to the anatomy of a whores mind.

Not very good at all. Well written but no emotion whatsoever.

Well written but too many holes

As written, I don't see the wife succumbing to an arrogant prick like Todd. I don't see Nathan simply letting her walk out without putting the pain to Todd. He certainly has the smarts and the money to take care of Todd. Why didn't he? I don't see a strong woman like Maime EVER leaving her children. Not ever. And in the epilogue you portray her as changed for the worse. Her husband and children are hers for the taking and you don't think she would have had the courage to at least try? None of the characters seemed to follow to "type" as you wrote them. That's why I gave the story a "1".

Sex is sex

Give me a break, sex is sex. It is all about the relationship between two people. Freaky illicit sex may add a little excitement for a while but soon it will stop being as exciting and start being stressful as cheating has to be covered up and the sex becomes familiar. So, after 4 months of cheating, I doubt it was still that hot. I do believe some people like cheating for the sake of cheating. They want to destroy their marriage. They are self destructive. They do not really love their spouse. So you can't have it both ways, you can't have a cheater who loves their spouse because it is a contradiction in behavior, they are lying. If they really are not lying then they are so irrational that it can only be a symptom of mental illness. If they are that crazy, the spouse is better off without them anyway.

WRITTEN BY A white NIGGER

LOWEST FORM OF BLACK MALE(not), THE KIND THAT SELLS DRUGS TO KIDS, SPORT-STARS,RAPERS, why because it reads like a wimps ass story written by a black female pretending to be a black male writer....the truest form of slave.
Black male? hahaha no! wonder why they(black women) are inferior to all other races, they cant even make a decent hero in an imaginary story...ie a black woman pretending to be a black male writing a tale of her life or as best as she could hope for.

X_bishop where are you now , you haven't writen anything in years

I love your work , your endings leave a void in me. I need more , your writing is like a drug. Please come back and write again. I know you are out there!

Excellent and heart breaking

x-bishop,

I would love to see you start writing again.

not sure why

Commenter before me thought story was so great. Wife becomes another man's slut and enjoys being whored out to clients.
Husband sits around whipped and whining
If you were to start writing again check out Facebook profile of dearbornmt@yahoo.com
Wife is cherial cheater. Her 3rd husband knows and does nothing but sob to HER MOTHER ABOUT IT. HER OWN MOTHER TOLD HIM TO DIVORCE THE SLUT.
SHE DOESN'T MIND THAT HER ENTIRE EXTENDED FAMILY KNOWS. MIGHT BE HYPERBOLE BUT I GUESS HALF OF HELENA MONTANA KNOWS. CERTAINLY THE WHOLE COMMUNITY OF TWODOT MONTANA KNOWS. SHE WAS KNOWN TO REGULARLY VISIT THAT SMALL TOWN'S BAR WITH ONE OF HER LOVERS AND IN FRONT OF EVERYONE THEY WOULD GO AT IT HOT AND HEAVY...INVLUDING IN FRONT OF HER AUNT AND UNCLE
SHE DID LOSE COLLEGE INSTRUCTOR JOB...SEEMS CHASING AFTER AND SCREWING STUDENTS IS SEXUAL COERCION

I cannot believe this is the same author that wrote the end to cruise deception.

You want to picture the cheating cunt that way at the end, fine. It was all her own doing

But, you destroy the man too?? You have him pining year after year and never able to move on. No love life, no happiness.

You also, and here is the unforgivable, leave the kids completely without any explanation of what is going on. Letting them think their mother abandoned them without any reasons save what gossip they hear?!!!

This is the second story I read. The first was ok. This sucked ass.

I hope this isn't a recurring theme, a complete pussy of a man wallowing in misery.

oh but

Maime did rub it in his face unlike what she said to Trina
Kind of felt like MATT MOREAU or RICHARD GERALD wrote this story and that is not a compliment

Another one of these...

I never understand these stories where the wife becomes addicted to one man's cock. I mean, has that actually happened before? There are lots of ways a man can control a woman mentally, but sexually? I mean, sex isn't Heroin! You don't suddenly become addicted after one session.

I don't know. TheTalkMan and markdaysaid use this superior male/female trope a lot, but those are fluff stories. Kinda annoying to see it in a serious story like this.

Garbage

Garbage that a man would give a damn about that cum dumpster slut 4 years later.....

Brilliant Story

It is about the supposedly sexual nature of ties between people and that sex will always be more important than anything else. Plus, that once a strong tie has been broken that it can not be recovered.