All Comments on 'Centigrade or Fahrenheit'

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My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleabout 19 years ago
HOT~

"do I season with champagne

or just baste a tender heart

I'd sprinkle you with diamonnds

to ease those thighs apart"

Charming and witty hehehehey!

Maria2394Maria2394about 19 years ago
:)

excellent rhythm you have going on in this one, its alomst like a slow dance, whispered in a lady's ear. I really enjoyed this, sandspike--good job

Bill DadaBill Dadaabout 19 years ago
It Rocks

I don't normally like stuff that rhymes. Not true here, I'm sure the rhythm has something to do with that and the great imagery.

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnalmost 19 years ago
Very good

surfing erotica and found this little gem. Diamonds work, Spike. Thanks for the ride.

~Syni

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