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Nice
I love the story but...
When they were having sex, she says that she hasn't felt a cock inside her in a year. But at the start you specifically say that she moved in two weeks ago and that she's the type to give it up on the first date...
For you to get that kind of information, doesn't it mean that she should've had a date in that two week period and got laid? I mean, how else would you know?
Plus, didn't you say that you'd start with colleen and just seduce the other two while you were working with the other two? How come you started with the mom and megan? Although, to be fair, that is more logical. Get the easy two, and then go back to your normal look and work on collen. If you try to work on all three at the same time then you'd probably get caught...
Nice story anyway...
Hope you care enough to finish it....
Nice
I love the story but...
When they were having sex, she says that she hasn't felt a cock inside her in a year. But at the start you specifically say that she moved in two weeks ago and that she's the type to give it up on the first date...
For you to get that kind of information, doesn't it mean that she should've had a date in that two week period and got laid? I mean, how else would you know?
Plus, didn't you say that you'd start with colleen and just seduce the other two while you were working with the other two? How come you started with the mom and megan? Although, to be fair, that is more logical. Get the easy two, and then go back to your normal look and work on collen. If you try to work on all three at the same time then you'd probably get caught...
Nice story anyway...
Hope you care enough to finish it....
And by the way, When he brought her back to his place... Wouldn't she know he was her neighbor? Considering that he lives right next door...
Huh?
He fixed himself up so she would not recognize him as her next door neighbor, then took her to his home -- next door? I don't think so.
Nice Story - one comment...
I'm a fan of your stories, and this one is good, but I've noticed you often mistakenly mess up on the bra sizes. 32GGG usually denotes a lady with a small back and monstrous boobs (a good thing), not a "thick" lady. A girl who is 5'8 and 110 pounds would most likely not be a 42DD, simply because that would imply a larger woman (ie, a 52GG woman would probably be quite a larger woman). 32GGG should be the 5'8 110 pounder and 42DD should be the larger lady. Remember, the smaller the number, and the larger the cup, the more striking it is.
Keep it up!
Which, as it happens...
is pretty bizarre lol
SN
More To Come
I like that you like women with small bodies and bigger breasts but most "critics" on Literotica have all ready gotten on my case for that. I'll keep it in mind though.
Love Knockers
I would love to meet the Knockers!!
EVERYBODY'S A CRITIC
I HAVE READ MOST OF YOUR STUFF AND LOVE IT.
YEAH, SOMETIMES FACTS GET A LITTLE JUMBLED, BUT THIS IS FANTASY.
WE NEED MORE OF THE KNOWCKER GIRLS, THEY MAKE ME DROOL
LUV THEM
THANKS
I Want to see More !!!
I enjoy reading your stories and hope to see more of this one please continue it soon
Good Start...Needs some detail work
Fun story line and pretty well written. I look forward to additional installments. I couldn’t quite figure out how she didn’t know it was her disguised neighbor when they went back to his house…seems a bit far fetched. But, hey, for big boobs, I’ll keep reading. *wink*
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