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by Squeezebox74
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Anonymousabout 6 years agothis poem has some grit
it is careless and sloppy and should be refined but give the squeeze box her due, she really lays her heart on the sidewalk and you feel for her pain, just step over her heart
sanishenabout 6 years agonice form
I love the jagged form of these verses - well done - let's have more
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