Erotic, erotic, erotic!
It's completely refreshing to read a well-written story (I get distracted by poor grammar, misspellings, lack of or incorrectly used punctuation, poor syntax, etc).
This is the first of your submissions I've ever read, abd I can't wait to sample others.
English
Great story-telling!
Erotic, erotic, erotic!
It's completely refreshing to read a well-written story (I get distracted by poor grammar, misspellings, lack of or incorrectly used punctuation, poor syntax, etc).
This is the first of your submissions I've ever read, abd I can't wait to sample others.
Thank you so much for a great story.
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