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by SweetOblivion

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erectus123erectus123about 6 years ago
nice job SO

I'd change the first word of the last line to 'I'

Ashesh9Ashesh9about 6 years ago
Slash! Crack! Owwww..........sob.........

Whoosh!

Merceeeee!

Eeeeeeeeek!

Shriek!

Swish!!!

visioneervisioneerabout 6 years ago
Wonderful

A English sonnet with a D/s theme... lovely. This form is not easy to do, so I congratulate you on a terrific poem.

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I enjoy caring relationships with quiet, polite, women with open minds and good senses of humour, be it in a longer-term arrangement or just a one off. If you are up for it, I will engage in daddy-ply, d/s play, impact play and other sensual games. Definitely not into hurti...