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All Comments on 'Winter Night'

by GGLOL69

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jenorma2012jenorma2012about 6 years ago
not bad

A little short,not much build up but still a good story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Written in haste

Good plot but needs editing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
worthless

Just terrible writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Potential

As discussed by others the fantasy is good but grammar and sentence structure is horrendous. Mine is disgusting to so when I noticed it and am offended by it, it must be really outrageous.

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