by PointSix
This is a really sweet story and i want to read lots more of Rose and Lily.
They have the beginnings of a lovely relationship . The end realization dream
was a nice way to have Lily realise shes in love with Rose.
You write such good tender stories , and i think this one a few more
chapters in it yet.
Thank you
You are one of the very few authors who can cause me to have conflicting emotions...
On the one hand I adore your writing and your ability to draw one into the story itself. The flip side to that is I want to scream at how short your chapters are. Lol. I would love it if you could see the story of these two to the end. I'd also love longer chapters but I'm greedy and selfish like that. Lol. Thank you for sharing your stories with us!
I wouldn't mind seeing longer chapters but can't wait for the next one.
Such a sweet story. I'm in love with Rose and Lily. Waiting on chapter three and hopefully there'll be many more after that.
I don’t care if they are short as long as they are well written. And baby you’ve got perfectly. I need more much, much more!
I like the buildup. Please continue with this story. I look forward to more from you.
When the end finally comes I hope you will give us a true ending,not they had sex and that's it.
This is so engaging, and tempting, comfortably reeling you into the story like you’re living in it. Please take this a long way, multi chapters and very descriptive. This is good.
This is such a good story! Draws the reader in, and is the perfect pace. It isn't dragging on or jumping straight to sex like other stories I've read. Great job! Excited for more :)