Would love to read chapter 2 and see more develope between between Vanessa and her young lover assistant Astacio.....
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Anonymous03/23/06
Praise!
I have been reading Literotica, extensively, for some time and have never found a story that "I" wanted to comment on. I enjoyed the story very much and feel that L would enjoy reading further episodes on this, as a series.My imagination allows me to enjoy a good tale more than a visual representation. Please, don't disappoint me by not carrying this on.
Pat
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Anonymous06/06/06
Dear sir,
Having read for the last thirty years, I can distinguish between a good and a bad story. You have it. Try your hand in fiction. I do not know, probably you are an established writer, but, if you are not, you should try.
With best wishes,
sabyasachi_nath@yahoo.com
English
This story is screamming.....
for a chapter 2
Awsome story
Can wait for chapter 2
Fantastic
Please continue with Chapter 2
Grrrreat!!
Would love to read chapter 2 and see more develope between between Vanessa and her young lover assistant Astacio.....
Praise!
I have been reading Literotica, extensively, for some time and have never found a story that "I" wanted to comment on. I enjoyed the story very much and feel that L would enjoy reading further episodes on this, as a series.My imagination allows me to enjoy a good tale more than a visual representation. Please, don't disappoint me by not carrying this on.
Pat
Dear sir,
Having read for the last thirty years, I can distinguish between a good and a bad story. You have it. Try your hand in fiction. I do not know, probably you are an established writer, but, if you are not, you should try.
With best wishes,
sabyasachi_nath@yahoo.com
Pure Fun!
A rare treat!
Thx!
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