All Comments on 'Working for Miss Black Pt. 01'

Really looking forward to seeing where this one will be going.

Enough of a good start to want to see how the story continues. It could really have done with being expanded into a couple of pages so the story could have been taken further along to really grab the readers attention. Only my opinion, of course, and observations not criticism. I hope that other people will post with encouragement.

... despite this genre / fetish definitely not being my cup of tea I could not refrain from reading this chapter to the end. The quality of writing was that addictive. A really fast paced intro into a special universe with hinting at tremendous potential for an epic story ...lots of entertainment, suspense and erotic fantasy scenes.

:-) :-) :-) :-)