All Comments on 'One Panty Obsessed Father'

Your first writing perhaps? Keep going but check more carefully before publishing. This jumps from being written in the third person to the first person in places. Also, the action takes sudden leaps which I found made it hard to read.

Good for your first submission.

A little short but ok. I prefer more emotion of love but that's just me

Again Welcome and look forward to future submissions

Love when a daddy just can't help but force his baby girl to let him taste and tease her sweet body. All daddies must be their daughters' first and best lovers...the first to make their sweet tight virginal pussies squirt.

I ENJOYED YOUR VERY FIRST STORY ON LITEROTICA! IT WAS VERY GOOD. BEING A RETIRE EDITOR OF A RENOWNED MAGAZINE, YOU DID A VERY GOOD JOB. I'VE READ GOOD STORIES ONLY TO BE RUINED BY HYPER HYPHENATIONS AND .....'s USED FOR EMPHASIS OR DRAG OUT A MOMENT LIKE BEING OUT OF BREATH BY AN ORGASM. I HOPE YOU STAY AWAY FROM THIS WAY OF WRITING. I'VE READ MANY STORIES THAT I THREW IN THE TRASH BIN BECAUSE OF PUNCTUATION AND .......'s TRY LISTENING TO A STORY WITH A TEXT READER LIKE TEXTALOUD AND SEE HOW LONG YOU MAKE IT BEFORE STOPPING IT ANS DELETING THE WHOLE STORY! THANK YOU Sienna Raine FOR A GREAT STORY. GOOD LUCK!

Father daughter thing is a great part of this site.

Love the story and hope you have lots more coming.

Would you like to help with a few of mine??

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No father refers to himself as "daddy" when talking to a daughter of that age. This shit is pretty much a copy of half the daddy/daughter stories on Literotica.

This made me wet.

Great story. Got me wet, and then of course I orgasmed just thinking of my own daddy. I've teased Rick for years, but he's too scared of bitch mum to give in. I'm stacy18_bi at Hotmail if you want to hit me up....dadztrd7$s

My real father passed away when I was about 6 & I really can't stand my step-father! Maybe I need a father figure to guide me in what I'm needing, Idk. I'm just very picky so he'd have to be amazing. I like how the father basically just got all in! Sniffin' panties to thrusting his cock & cum right in! I'm not sure if that's weird but that's exactly how I'd want it. If I had time to think about what was going on, I'd so NO & run to my room & lock the door! This definately got me wet! 😊