All Comments on 'Rivals'

More chapters?

when should we expect Rivals Chapter 2 ?

Short and to the point. No background. This is not a love story, just need and desire. It would be nice if you give us a reason for these two to be together, a flashback maybe. Hot story as it is, I like it.

Yeah, this was excellent! I wouldn't mind reading another chapter or two about Dillon and Arden. Thanks for sharing this with us!

My favorite story so far....im craving more arden n dillon please !!!!

Please!

As another person stated, it was short and to the point. It could use more fleshing out (more about Dillon and Arden). Love stories are more my thing, but these are also fun reads for a change of pace. Five stars!

Well you really seem to like wam bam and done you apparently don't believe in a build up to the sex such as how it started if expect people here to keep reading your stories learn how to write a story with some build up to it for that is what creates the mood for the sex not the sex itself