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by Evil Alpaca01/14/05

Keep going

Actually, it was a very good start, but a little more sexual tension would've been helpful, even if you weren't going to get to the "main event" in this piece. Keep going . . . I see a lot of potential in this story.

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by Anonymous12/11/05

Very promising start

Nice start, Sididis. You realy take your time to get a good build-up. I agree with the first comment that a little more sexual tension added would have made it even better but that's a detail. I hope you keep up the good work. I used to be a goth myself before moving on to power-electronics and noise so that's another reason why i appreciate your work. Nice !

kim

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