All Comments on 'Daddy's Adventures with Emma'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Needs some practice

The premise of the story is good but it feel rushed and the switch between first and third person is confusing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
I Agree

Good idea but the story was too short and rushed. Seriously insipid dialogue. Shame. Could have been good. 2 stars.

SamWarrensSamWarrensabout 6 years ago
Part 2?

This story is begging for part 2. In next chapter after weeks of fucking, daddy gets both Emma and mom pregnant.

They for an incestuous poly relationship.

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