All Comments on 'The Women in My Life'

That was a good story .Thank you.

More please! Fuck your daughter while she eats your girlfriend. And maybe they both get pregnant.

very good... more please

Kept switching between “wife” and “girlfriend” / stepmom, so be sure to proofread. Coulda been a bit longer. Other than that, great. Awesome premise.

So hot! Would love to read another. Maybe where he’s fucking the daughter and the daughter is going down on the step mom?

Great story, but you're going to want to proof read it, or have another proof read it. A lot of girlfriend/wife mixups, etc...

The idea is great, and the buildup is good. I would have liked a longer session, with some swapping, etc. Although, of course that could come in the next chapter!

As others have noted, there is some editing needed. The girlfriend/wife mixup confused me. Either is fine, just stick with one.