All Comments on 'One Night at April's'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Score

5*. I'm surprised this story doesn't have a higher score. The ending was a hoot.

w8ingnoww8ingnowabout 6 years ago
sucked

what an asshole

KlitomaticKlitomaticabout 6 years ago
You're an ass

But I like the way you think , , , Grins

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Loved it

Perfect April Fools joke on us....and a situation I can really relate to :)

TheKrrakTheKrrakabout 6 years ago
ROFL

Nice April's Fool (in all senses of the phrase)

5/5 for the chuckles

tazz317tazz317about 6 years ago
EVER IS ALREADY MORE AVAILABLE

than never could ever be. TK U MLJ LV NV

Wickedelf6000Wickedelf6000about 6 years ago
Wait wut???

Butbutbut hahaha you got me! 5 stars! Well played and well written! Puts away hand lotion and tissues...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
LOL

I chuckeled for 10 minutes. loved it.

c4vetteman94c4vetteman94about 6 years ago
I want to be pissed

But I can't, kudos to you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

it's not april yet!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
had me going

that was a real corker ha ha ha

PapaMikePapaMikeabout 6 years ago
What

a dick. :) Great ending.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Well Done

Great April fool story! Some readers might not like it, but I think it was the very best.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Winner

Winner!

BAnde53507BAnde53507about 6 years ago
Brilliant!

So good! Made me laugh. Best writing prank ever.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Job well done.

Good story, not the ending I expected, even mentioned it was an April Fools submission. Definitely entertaining and one I have bookmarked in my favorites.

jetoshjetoshabout 6 years ago
YOU B#%*~\{D!!

Well done!!!

Crusader235Crusader235about 6 years ago
Dammit man!!

Ya got me!

rodryder44rodryder44almost 6 years ago
Dratz!

You have a noticeable female side: COCK TEASE!!!

gunmakergunmakerover 5 years ago

CUTE!!! BWAHAHAHAHA.

davyupdavyupover 5 years ago
Hook line and sinker

Well done!

DogFuzzDogFuzzabout 5 years ago
Nope

For such a talented write I expected more. Just not up to your usual standards. I suspect you just wanted a change of pace for a “quickie”.

YouDidWhutYouDidWhutabout 5 years agoAuthor
Oh ye

of little faith.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Just found this.

I just read this; you mendacious bastard! Great job! Suckered me right in - so I think I'll just write the sequel for you. Let me know if you'd like April to get DP'ed by the boys. Hee Hee

BadHusbandMikeBadHusbandMikeover 4 years ago
Yup you got me.

And I loved it anyway. Btw you're a damn tease.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
😂😂😂😂❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Perfect!

jmmj5jmmj5over 3 years ago

Good stuff.

I really enjoyed that.

Thank you.

Oldsofty1961Oldsofty1961over 1 year ago

ha ha ha lmao great short story loved the ending solid five

Davester37Davester378 months ago

A solid 5 for April Fools!

KingCuddleKingCuddle4 months ago

Fun "reveal"...:+)))

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

ya got me........nice work

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