All Comments on 'April's Tool'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Thank you! That was so much fun... and lighthearted, too!

Enjoyed it very much.

AxelottoAxelottoabout 6 years ago
Good save at the end, I thought it would go much darker

Thanks, this one was fun.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
"...only to have my family and friends all shout 'surprise' and remind me it was my birthday that week."

Yeah, he didn't get a date with his crush, but getting a surprise birthday party is not exactly much of an April Fool's prank.

WatcherRobWatcherRobabout 6 years ago
Good job

April is a naughty girl, goody, goody!! Liked it a lot!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Good đź‘Ť

Great job

bruce22bruce22about 6 years ago
Worrisome

Until she let up I was afraid that he was going to suffer an extraction without anesthesia.

oldtwitoldtwitabout 5 years ago
Very Good

Oh what a great idea, slow and well paced and just so well written.

jtwheelsjtwheelsalmost 4 years ago
Ok faint praise

Huh

dgfergiedgfergieabout 3 years ago

interesting wife, kind of sexy story but full of temptation and possibiities for disaster, onlt room for two in a marriage and looky no touchy when married. Well written though.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Fun, excellent!

AnonymousAnonymous5 days ago

Very nice, a short and funny story!

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Amateur word-smith. Proffesional procrastinator. Busy with a few on the go. Please be patient. I work full time and fiddle here when i get a few quiet moments to myself. Thankyou for enjoying my mutterings.