All Comments on 'Home for Winter Break'

Please continue this story lone. Please tell is more about the act of making love to this beautiful woman

Married to a doc and she still believes nursing prevents pregnancy

this could develop into a very hot and sexy story.

Most of the people who come here to read sexy stories aren't too bothered about medical accuracy. If you don't like the story it's best to say nothing.

What? Only people who like a story are allowed to comment on it? Really?

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What planet are you from?

This is my first story ever... I don't mind criticism, and hope to get better. And yes, breastfeeding does provide some protection in the first 6 months... but this girl doesn't care. She's not stupid, She's justifying herself. XO

Why should I say nothing if I don't like it? That's bullshit. Criticism for a writer is more important than compliments.

While the subject matter isn't exactly my cup of tea, I found the story to be put together fairly well. However, the back & forth point of view...it isn't normally a good thing, and I think you should try next time to pick one and stick with it.

Good luck!

NEVER, lol DAD RETURNS HOME AND DISCOVER WIFE AND SON FUCKING IN CCT VIDEO. DAD HANGS HIMSELF TO DEATH THEN SON AND WIFE LIVE HAPPILY EVER AFTER! YAY, AWESOME!

it was great. Give us another!

please give us more of the story. maybe next time the son take the step mom through her pantyhose

More please this was great don't stop.......

more more more

Why did you stop?

Good story,buto short needmore storys like this,impregnating the mother, with lots more story's getting the mothers pregnant by step-son's or by young guys.

The story line is beautiful. And the presentation is realistic. You should continue the story with more chapters. The stepmother should bear more of his children and feed him more of her milk.

Wish my stepmom would take care on me while in college. Love to Take her out to dinner. Have fun while taking her out. Finger her while sucking her mellons. Yes, I come to you whenever you want. Stepmom fantasy

Random you need some help from the comment you made dad's done nothing for that kind of reaction