All Comments on 'The Holiday Ch. 06: Final'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Not bad

This is the first of your stuff I've read. This was great. I loved the way he started off angry and kinda raped her asshole. Then both started enjoying it. I'm going to read the other chapters now. 4 stars.

DragonRider55

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Fantastic

I read the whole series. I loved Sarah's discovery process. I liked how you wrote about her wanton feelings, her curiosity, and her fears.

If you continue this story I would like to read about bringing Ted into the mix, both with Astrid and Bill so he can experience a same sex encounter with Bill the way Sarah did with Astrid.

5 stars!

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