All Comments on 'The Babysitter Takes Over Ch. 02'

And the abuse continues, as Teri destroys any dignity of her employer. Sick theme

I love the blackmail scenario you've set up and your writing is really good, too. My only suggestion would be to add some details to what's going on. For example, when Teri starts fucking him with the dildo, I'd like to hear how big it is and how much it hurt when it first went in, what the girls were saying while they watched him, etc. Your storyline is great and the blackmail scenario is just believable enough to be really titillating. A bit more detail would really make it awesome. Thanks for writing!

This was my first submittal here and really appreciate the suggestion. I’m thinking of a fourth part and any input is appreciated... ss

Not crazy about the blackmail but the public humiliation is great.

I am not sure about the babysitter attitude. but I will keep reading. its pretty good.

OH shit boyfriend is going to be drilling both the wife and sissy

After reading chapter 1, I didn’t think the story could get any worse or more unbelievable, but chapter 2 proved me wrong. The 18 year old female character has to have at least a trace of conscience in order for the story to be even tolerable.