All Comments on 'It's Only Lust Ch. 01'

Great start. Keep it rolling.

A couple more pages including them fucking would have been a better read than leaving us hanging like that. This could get nice and hot though. Don't stop now

THE END? I'M HOPING YOU CONTINUE AFTER IT JUST STARTED TO GET INTERESTING. WHEN I GOT TO THE MIDDLE OF THE STORY I HAD TO GO BACK AND START OVER BECAUSE I STILL DIDN'T KNOW JUST WHO WAS WHO. WAS RICHARD HIS FATHER IN LAW AND JOYCE HIS MOTHER IN LAW? WHERES HIS WIFE? I GOT SO CONFUSED. JUST TRYING TO HELP AFTER ALL I AM A RETIRED EDITOR.

keep going

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Thanks Randog025,

If only my mind could keep up with my typing. I hope to improve each time I write and comments like yours help.

OMG, what a start! I am loving this.