Mermaid,
That was a truly awesome story. I really enjoyed it and so did my boyfriend *wink*, I know that he'll enjoy it even more after he's read it. As of yet, he has had the benefits of the after effects!
Thank you so much for shring your creativity...
Nice
It is a nice story Mermaid, I liked it.
Incredible!
That is the most erotic story I've read on here! I actually felt like I was part of the group! AMAZING!!!
OH
Whoa...that sounds like a lot of fun! Great story...wish it was a bit longer. *wink*
Very tasty-riffic...
I really enjoyed this (BOING!) and can't wait for (ohohohoh) the next part.
captainhubcap
Second Chapter Cumming
Thanks for your comments! Yum, Yum, Tasty! FYI, the second chapter is in and waiting to be approved, so please be patient!
Great first grouping
Mermaid,
That was a truly awesome story. I really enjoyed it and so did my boyfriend *wink*, I know that he'll enjoy it even more after he's read it. As of yet, he has had the benefits of the after effects!
Thank you so much for shring your creativity...
xoxoxo
Petitelove
Definitely
Well written. Thoroughly enjoyed "your submission."
Excellent!
Great wwriting, Mermaid. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
Hot
Very hot story........
And sounded like a LOT of fun....
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