awesome story loved every bit of it...could be a book
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Anonymous02/20/05
Out of Control series
These stories were awesome! They were so hot! I loved them! I kept imagining myself as Kitten. It was great!
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Anonymous03/19/05
Sexy, sultry, and ohhhhhhh so hotttttttttt
This is such a sexyyyyyyyyyy hot series, made me wish He was my Big Bad Cop "Daddy". mmmmmmmmm. More Pleaseeeee?
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Anonymous08/21/05
Hot girl pleases daddy
I too am trying to get my daad to make love to me....I want to have a baby..my husband can not give me one.
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Anonymous08/22/05
Masterpiece..
You're truly a gifted writer. I know we all start out new and stumble a lot as authors but you either have the gift to begin with or you don't. I think this series out of all of them I've read so far showcases this. Amazing, engaging, outstanding.
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Anonymous02/20/06
Love it!
Most of us women have a fantasy of having a strong but caring man take us like this. Please write some more with these two characters.
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Anonymous06/29/06
truly a beaut story
I loved this story,as it shows that one persons likes are not always correct
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out of control
awesome story loved every bit of it...could be a book
Out of Control series
These stories were awesome! They were so hot! I loved them! I kept imagining myself as Kitten. It was great!
Sexy, sultry, and ohhhhhhh so hotttttttttt
This is such a sexyyyyyyyyyy hot series, made me wish He was my Big Bad Cop "Daddy". mmmmmmmmm. More Pleaseeeee?
Hot girl pleases daddy
I too am trying to get my daad to make love to me....I want to have a baby..my husband can not give me one.
Masterpiece..
You're truly a gifted writer. I know we all start out new and stumble a lot as authors but you either have the gift to begin with or you don't. I think this series out of all of them I've read so far showcases this. Amazing, engaging, outstanding.
Love it!
Most of us women have a fantasy of having a strong but caring man take us like this. Please write some more with these two characters.
truly a beaut story
I loved this story,as it shows that one persons likes are not always correct
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