All Comments on 'Blowjob Practice'

by John_StCloud

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
I didn't like it I loved it.

Right up my alley.

Working on a couple of stories of my own but using stepdaughters vs biological daughters.

Like to share ideas.

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UAlbanyGirl518UAlbanyGirl518about 6 years ago
Nice

Good story, and great setup for additional chapters, which I look forward t. Not only is dad looking to add the younger daughter to his class, he’s working on getting more out of the older daughter as well.

Nicely done!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
hot and fast

nice, a bit short though.

SomethingInTheWaySheMovesSomethingInTheWaySheMovesabout 6 years ago
Aside from the brevity of the story, it was a great read.

You're a competent writer (in terms of proper grammar and spelling), and you also have the ability to tell a story worth reading. Neither of those talents are especially common on Literotica, but it's particularly rare to find examples of both in one story.

Oh, and it was an original concept, and well-executed. Looking forward to reading more from you.

Turtle1952Turtle1952about 6 years ago
More please

this could go a long way yet. please keep going

kcsdtoolkcsdtoolabout 6 years ago
Potential

I really liked this story. I can see several chapters in the future. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Great story

Hopefully a pt 2 is coming. Want to hear about how this relationship continues and grows.

Solomons_SongSolomons_Songabout 6 years ago
Good story

Looking forward to part 2.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Chapter 2 idea?

Can the sequel be about Julie practicing on her uncle? THAT'D BE HOTT!!

lolax2lolax2almost 6 years ago
THIS NEEDS A PART 2!!!!

I love it! I hope the dad gets to fuck his 2 daughters :D

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooalmost 6 years ago
Beautiful story

Love Julie's approach to the situation.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Part 2 would be epic

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

its ok but wont be if it gets more involved

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Please continue this story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Loved it!

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I like getting my fantasies onto paper, and I'm happy to practice my writing. I have an incest kink, but I like loving and mutually supportive relationships. I want to hear from you - if you like this, let me know. If you're a woman who has fantasies about your father, I'd li...