All Comments on 'A Loyal, Cheating Wife Ch. 01-02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Post this cheating shit where it belongs! LOVING WIVES. Cheating is not in the least bit romantic 1* for your first failed attempt.

RTR10RTR10about 6 years ago
Fantasy...

She doesn’t actually cheat. It’s just a fantasy she has while looking at his FB pictures. Really, I thought the banter between the husband & wife was sweet & funny. Only an extremely close & secure couple could joke about stuff like this.

HTW2HTW2about 6 years ago
Stupid

Loving Wives. Still cheating no matter how it looks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Great Start

5 Stars for your first very successful attempt. Screw these other assholes who don’t like it. Can’t wait for chapter 3 when Maya and Dean hopefully have actual sex! Please keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
keep writing and submitting

interested in where this goes.

and there's always the amusement about anons who are horrified/ angered/ embarrassed/ aroused by cheating wives, or wives allowed to cheat, or husbands who get revenge....

NexttimeroundNexttimeroundabout 6 years ago
Very readable...

Made me want to keep reading. I don't think though that it is going to end well for hubby.

Sorry for being a grammar fascist but it should be "your belly is perfect" -- you did sort of ask for that kind of comment. No big deal. "You're" is short for "you are".

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
LIKE! I like your story very much, gave it a 4.25* (85% = A-). It is EROTIC, REALISTIC & ROMANTIC, 3-in-1.

I like how Jeremy & Maya interact.

The scene when Dean hides his hard on with a pillow is EPIC.

Maya's erotic fantasies were depicted masterfully.

MAYA IS A KEEPER.

I will marry her in my next life. In this life i will settle to reading Literotica stories in general & this series in particular.

Hope this is the only chapter. If it is, sucks to be me.

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