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Captured Starshine

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by Anonymous

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by sack01/17/05

Rhyming poems are difficult...

and this is much better than the normal run. Just curious, why were her seas brown? To rhyme with drown?

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by Anonymous07/23/06

seas of brown

I liked it. And seas of brown are her brown eyes.

Always hated english, destroying someone's work by trying to find some artsy sub meaning.

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by Amyfriend01/29/07

Beautiful poem...

the words make it come alive...

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by RedHairedandFriendly01/30/07

This. . .

was lovely. ~ Red

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