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by Anonymous03/22/08

wow :)

For imagination and emotional content.
A very nice one.
And the writing too.

Cheers
Yoron

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by averyschaefer03/20/15

great!

You have a great way at showing a story and the characters personalities. A heartfelt, beautiful written story.

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