All Comments on 'Just 18'

i don't know who amanda bynes is but this story is sexy as hell. :)

i love it so hot n steamy plus i know what amanda looks like so i can picture that

there was very little erotic action in this story. it seemed like amanda just had orgasm after orgasm after orgasm and while 'you' held out forever and ever. very unrealistic.

Way too unrealistic. it wasn't sexy. There was no originality to it at all, jus used tha same old shit "I knew full well that this tactic was likely going to blow up in my face. You can imagine my excitement, then, when it didn't." Bullshit. Work on it. alot.

hey, I'm a fan of miss bynes... but this wasn't all that hot. Not a lot of foreplay, not a lot of build up... just got to sex and that's it... However since it was about one of my fav stars I read it. Revise it and submit it, make it a little more interesting than some pick up story from the local bar man.