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by seranade

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flyguy69flyguy69over 19 years ago
Nice ideas

I liked "dark suited attire at/meeting for flesh" Some interesting ideas, here, particularly the celebration of death. I would do more with this theme. Also: "vulture".

annaswirlsannaswirlsover 19 years ago
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I enjoy your voice in this--

rats I did not copy the quote--- but the verse with is it lazy.... was especially gripping

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
interesting

I enjoyed this poem immensely. Keep writing.

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