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by twelveoone01/12/05

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Oh, brother, you are bad
"dairy-air"
That pun is so low, I loved it
Art, keep up the good work

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by 01/12/05

lager root!

;) Fresh and cheeky. Sex and humor is the very best recipe.

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by irishcatsmeow01/12/05

I can feel the fizz...

not a fan of the root beer float, but am a fan of this poem. Great job!

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