All Comments on 'Angel, Devil, Phantom, Fool.'

I love your details. I will savor this story several more times.

A nice and even romantic story. I liked it.

'April Seconds' was a good punchline.

And well written, which is a definite bonus.

Lue

Much of the early narrative was full of costume terms, and I was almost ready to give up. I am glad I stayed.

This story was well written and unique. It had a kind of slow build, but don't all the best stories?

Well done.

Exquisitely written and imaginative. Full of the hottest debaucery. The introduction was long by necessity and oh so essential to setting up the story line

do more like this good

Great story Alice, the first of yours that I have read. Beautifully written and developed. Congratulations.

Jim

Possibly my favourite story on here!

Alice... Alice... thanks for showing us a bit of your wonderland. It was absolutely a pleasure to read.

What a beautifully rendered setting and excellent story! Congrats on the win!

"My goodness," said the Red Queen, "what a delightfully wicked imagination you have!"

Alice curtsied. "Why, thank you, it's been my pleasure to write this little piece."

"Can I have what she's having?" cried the White Queen.

Alice laughed with delight, and took the stopper off the bottle, which was labelled on one side, 'Eat Me,' and on the other, 'Drink Me.'

Exquisite, Alice, just exquisite.

Very well done. Excellent sex scenes.

...raunchy as it absolutely also is. Thank you for a very nice party.

You wrote , What I think is far and away the best story of the contest and one of the best on literotica. I Thank you for sharing and you have a new fan

Perfection of the story, characters and plot is overwhelming. Your writing abilities are exceeded by none. To your editor I tip my hat. This story is so perfect that I am humbled that you permitted me to read it. My only suggestion to you, Alice, is to do it again. Thank you for taking the time and care to create such a masterpiece.

First I want to compliment you on an excellent story. Now I want to say how wonderful it was that I didn't have to 'read' my way through all of the blunders and errors that are usually in a story. Then, it comes to how much I wish there was a rest of the story. Can you please find it in your heart to finalize their story? I want to have all of the rest of it from the project to their dinner (out?), to how they end the night! Otherwise, it was just excellent!! Please keep writing!

I have not finished the list, but this is so far ahead of anything else so far that I will be amazed if you don't win it all. I will have to see what else you have up on this site. What a treat! Many thanks.

Thanks

Superb April Fool's story! Worth at least ten stars.

Amazingly erotic story but filled with beautiful tender romance as well.

One of the best I've read. Absolutely loved it.

touching myself, because for the first time in a long while, the writing was more enticing than getting off.

Stories on literotica are rarely this good, this is the first five star vote I've cast in a long time. Rich in imagery, engaging characters, hugely beguiling scenario, expertly paced and a conclusion most satisfying. Very nicely done!

I finished the story, even after I came. That's high praise indeed.

I'm serious, you're a great writer. You really made the characters come to life, and I personally would love to see where Devon and Nina would go next.

P.S. I wish I had that hide a seek room.

I think we're going to need a sequel to this particular party. It's annual right? ;)

Loved the writing, so engaging and definitely had me returning more than several times.

My husband sent this to me to read. The writing is fantastic, you truly have a way with words. I even told him if you had any actual books I'd have been happy to seek them out and read those too.

Well done

I always enjoy your writing . But just like Alice I am very greedy always looking for more. Well done.

This story is extremely well written and sucks the reader in. I truly enjoyed going on an adventure with Nina. Thanks for sharing.

This is one of the most beautifully written stories. I would love to see where Nina and Devon go ahead, please write a sequel to thiss

Thoroughly enjoyed the journey you crafted.

Very impressive flowing style, thank you.

A very fine tale, very well told. Your imagination is vivid, describing the atmosphere of the gala. I loved all the different rooms, especially as you described them from a "virgin's" point of view. And from a writer's perspective, you do dialogue nicely.

This deserves being the top rated tale in this category.

Yes, I'd like to read more of Nina and her new beau.

Thank you.

Just as good for Seconds. I like your style Ms. Alice.

So easy to picture the movie set “eyes wide shut” as you moved us around the mansion to the different rooms setting imaginations ablaze, Well written Alice, hope you get to write many more stories really enjoyed this one

This is one of the best stories I've read on any erotic site! Just the right balance of innocence and ribaldry. I would say that the reveal of Devon's role was no surprise. His first stern look gave that away.

I have to wonder if Nina is an author surrogate. That is an interesting thought.

This story was so good I had to bookmark it. I've read it over and over again. You should publish.

I honestly loved it, didn’t think I would but it was so well written I really got into it. Thank you for the fantasies!

Your use of metaphor, simile, and historical literary allusion was the thing that caught me eye.

That and the mingling of sexual awakening on Nina's part, I'm sure, has driven a number of readers over the proverbial, explosive climax. Myself included!

I especially loved your description of Devon's and Nina's delicious cumming out party..." this one unfurled petal by petal, a slow burn that ended with a sudden blossom of flame." Beautiful!

Fabulous! Well-written and so hot.

I thought this was very nice writing besides the delicious variety of imagination. My compliments for the wild ride.

Oh oh O! Wonderful story and wonderfully written. Thank you very much!

Great job, thanks for sharing your work. I loved it.

Jesus fuck, that was hot.