All Comments on 'John's April Fools'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
You could benefit from using an editor

Too many typos to be enjoyable. You should proof read your story or have someone else do it for you. Well written stories are just naturally sexier. All the mistakes detracts from the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Your one of the best parts of my life ......

Just one of them .....?

Run , John .....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
What a mess

And too funny for words? Forced chastity? The cage is a toy. He can remove it at anytime with simple tools. Or he can simply bitch slap his wife and take the key. He can also masturbate and ejaculate while wearing the cage. At least try to understand what you're writing about. I'd be willing to bet he took the lock to a locksmith and had 20 keys made. They are probably laying around all over the house, in his car and at his job. Moronic story.

IFAFILHGIFAFILHGover 3 years ago
W-T-F

Any husband that would be so stupid as to allow himself to be caged is the dumbest stupid fucker on the planet

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