All Comments on 'Monstergirls, Heroes and You Ch. 01'

Nice start, however I think you need to make the chapters about 3 - 5 pages long to get the story going more. I don't think you want to make it go for ages. Maybe our hero could develop magic too?

Why the hell would he leave them alive? They're effectively incapacitated, kill them so they can't come back later to cause more trouble! What the hell did they teach at this "Hero School?"

I liked this story, and this being your first time delving into erotica... I think you hit a potential homerun. keep up the good work.

This looks pretty cool so far. I do wish the Chapters were slightly longer, but so far so good.

A new way of starting this kind of story. You did a real decent job with what you have posted. Lets see how the story develops before I give my opinion.

Seriously good writing. There are not a lot of good stories around that are written this way. Please keep going. I would love to read more.

Natural Editorial Law requires me to not enjoy any story written in the Second Person narrative voice. Nevertheless, naive heroes versus predatory monster girls is a fun topic and I would like to see more!

this was dam good. i cant wait to read more!!

Please and thank you