All Comments on 'The Women in My Life Ch. 04'

by EroticWolfie

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verybigoneverybigoneabout 6 years ago
Best Chapter Yet

Great work hope this story keeps going

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Needs more dialogue

There needs to be some discussion about the history how this all started.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Not really an mmf. More of an mfm. Mmf would have had Sean and the dad fucking each other as well.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
FFFM

I want to see Ellie, move in permanently and brandi stop cheating. I would also like to see either the ex wife join or Ellie's friend. And the father breed all of them. Also in some sentences you say Brandi is his wife and in others she's the girlfriend.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

What about the neighbors?? And who is Brandi messing with. Tight black dress??? You are doing a great job. Didn’t expect the step brother, nice twist

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