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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/23/18

Garbage

At least try to make your ridiculous fantasy vaguely believable and stop wasting our time.

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by Axelotto03/24/18

Ignore the stupid comment from a Nonymouse

Short, but not bad. Its always nice when good customer service it acknowledged.

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by MishaPearl205/16/18

Well Done, Gorcq...

...the shorter the tale, the more diificult it is to create a fresh world. You found a good balance and set a fast stage for your characters. MP2 :-)

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by eroticwriter0105/21/19

Well done sir

Your story was well written, your characters believable/realistic, and the scenario a very erotic one. It sounds as though you've opened a proverbial Pandora's box as far as where this story's world could go, and I do hope you continue with further installments.

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