by Gorcq
At least try to make your ridiculous fantasy vaguely believable and stop wasting our time.
Short, but not bad. Its always nice when good customer service it acknowledged.
...the shorter the tale, the more diificult it is to create a fresh world. You found a good balance and set a fast stage for your characters. MP2 :-)
Your story was well written, your characters believable/realistic, and the scenario a very erotic one. It sounds as though you've opened a proverbial Pandora's box as far as where this story's world could go, and I do hope you continue with further installments.