All Comments on 'Wake-Up Call'

by Gorcq

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Garbage

At least try to make your ridiculous fantasy vaguely believable and stop wasting our time.

AxelottoAxelottoabout 6 years ago
Ignore the stupid comment from a Nonymouse

Short, but not bad. Its always nice when good customer service it acknowledged.

MishaPearl2MishaPearl2almost 6 years ago
Well Done, Gorcq...

...the shorter the tale, the more diificult it is to create a fresh world. You found a good balance and set a fast stage for your characters. MP2 :-)

eroticwriter01eroticwriter01almost 5 years ago
Well done sir

Your story was well written, your characters believable/realistic, and the scenario a very erotic one. It sounds as though you've opened a proverbial Pandora's box as far as where this story's world could go, and I do hope you continue with further installments.

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