All Comments on 'Under Control'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Beautiful!

Very well told!

ham_sandwichham_sandwichalmost 6 years ago

A good story! Now that you have our attention, perhaps you'll write Chapter Two and let us know what happened when you got back to Paul's.

SimonOSimonOalmost 6 years ago
Love the realism in this :-)

Believable characters. Good job on it.

VancouverManVancouverManover 5 years ago
Well done!!!

Kept me hard! I wish she had dominated him more. Great writing and good characters.

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