All Comments on 'The Vacation'

by Peter_

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Can't wait to see what happens

I liked this...just don't keep us "on the edge" for too long...please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Great Start

Great Start Peter, enjoyed Friday Night immensly and this one has started promisingly

Simon

wagoneer88wagoneer88over 19 years ago
Wimp?

I realise that it's silly to argue with the author, but I still don't see this guy as a total wimp. Yes, his wife dominates his cock and his orgasms (or lack thereof). But i can visualise him being a confident manager or boss when he's at his office/store.

Why not write us a story of how he is in command at work one morning - that is, until his wife brings his lunch or takes him out for lunch, and reduces him to a slave with a throbbing cock for half an hour.

fakers51fakers51over 19 years ago
What a way to start

This was a great read and guess after something like this you can almost be prepared for anything else. I am in suspense, awaiting for the other proverable shoe to drop.

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