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I hope
Uncle Pervey reads this...he seems to be on a lawyer thing
Look I found this to be in Contempt; I would sentence you to a life of writing, no time off for your bad behaviour.
If I may make a judicious comment, I question the shift (despite it being in Final Notes) from absurd to preaching. BTW instead of "Final Notes" if you insist, how about "In Summation"
I liked this, alot - you are too much
in response to 1201
Thank you!! wonderful feedback and I totally agree, it did turn preachy and thats the last thing I ever want to do.
I wrote this nearly 2 years ago for the Halloween poem contest on a thread Eve started. It won, with 2 votes, lol. I had almost forgotten about it until I read that mandatory sentencing guidelines were going to be phased out, or something like that. That is exactly what the poem was about. Those laws make as much sense as this "poem"
I will work up an edit and turn it in..how about, In Summation ( wonderful 1201, I musta missed that part of the OJ trial ;)
In Summation;
Ah, fuck it!
:D
mentioned
Your porm was mentioned on the thread
"New Poems Reviews"
thanks for the journey
Art~
Jesus, Normal!
What the hell is in your head? 'Cuz I want in there!! What a cool place to be! I love this, and it's goin in my favs! Thanks!
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