All Comments on 'The Private Dick Ch. 01'

Hope you continue the series.

You have 2 great parts that would make excellent follow-up stories.

She is 6 months along, due in 2 months, and she will be available to him for 3 months; must be that new math thing. Otherwise a good start on what could be a great series.

This could be a very hot sexy story. I hope you write more of it real soon.

Where's chapter 2 and more I hope???

rmcgee,

Well, for the first out of the box, not to shabby.

You really need to stop, not writting more chapters.

Thanks for this ride, it's been fun.

WB